I’ve been a member of several writers’
critique groups over the years and I’ve come to realize a major factor in each
group’s downfall has been the lack of writers. This may seem quite logical, but
it’s true for any group. Knitters, martial artists, foreign language studies,
puzzlers…if you are a part of a group and aren’t involved in the activity, the
group suffers. Add in a few more people and the group collapses, becomes less
fun, or has less worth for those who are serious.
When I first started attending a critique
group, there were about 15-20 or more who showed every week. I had heard many
more used to attend. Why the dropout rate? Probably it started with something
like this. “Sally, do you have anything to read tonight?” “No, I’ve been too
busy this last week to write.” “Okay, but we really want you to read.” “I’ll
try to have something next week.”
Well, as Yoda once said, “Do or do not do.
There is no try.” You’re either writing or you’re not. So, the attendance
dropped. By the time I stopped attending my first critique group, we were down
to a core of about four or five with maybe two of us reading per week. It was a
waste of my time to read for others who weren’t writing. I worked hard to have
something every week, either a short story or another chapter from the ongoing
book. I ceased going to the meetings not because I stopped writing, but because
others did. I wasn’t going to go to a meeting where two or three people read
and the rest of the time we just chatted. Plus, I didn’t feel those who weren’t
writing, who weren’t keeping up with improving their craft, had justification
to critique my material.
So, is it lack of interest or distractions
that keep people from writing? Television, radio, Internet, phone, mail, email,
kids, pets, spouse, something interesting out the window…all are part of a
large group of distractions. I’m not perfect; my attention wanders at times.
Much of my writing is done at a facility where people could come in at any
moment. They’re distracting. I understand distractions and I’m willing to let a
few excuses go by. When they become consistent, however, then I know the person
really isn’t serious about writing.
In a recent interview I mentioned my ideal
place to write. I likened it to a deserted island with no phone, no TV, no
radio, no Internet, no people, with enough food and water to sustain me until I
felt like rejoining society. Serious writers will make time to write, or will
set aside a portion of the day or week and tell the rest of the world to leave
them alone until a certain period has ended. Behind a closed door, with the TV,
internet, and cell phone turned off. If the radio is on when I’m writing, it’s
tuned to a classical music station.
Don’t let your writing be a distraction to
your writing. What I mean is, don’t stop after every sentence or chapter to go
back and edit or change things. So many times in those critique groups I heard
chapter one from a few people over and over. They took home our comments, did a
rewrite, then came back, took home more comments and did another rewrite. The
cycle continued. We never heard chapter two. Soon, they either gave up or
decided the particular story wasn’t working out, so they switched to a new
story and brought in a new chapter one.
Another example of a writing distraction is
too much preparation. I realize every person has his or her individual writing
style. Outlines that may take eight months to picking up a pen and starting in
on something without a direction. Whatever works for you, do it. However, if
you are a type who sets up character profiles and setting profiles, don’t get
bogged down in the minutiae. There must be a time when you start writing the
first sentence.
One more example. Finish a story. Recently
I have found myself falling into the trap of starting one story, getting
partially completed, then jumping to another story, then a third, and I discovered
I wasn’t completing a project. When I realized my problem, I stopped jumping
around and set myself a goal to finish a particular story by the end of the
year with at least one or two rewrites.
I’m not sure how long I took to complete
“Beta.” I do know I did a few rewrites, character tinkering, scene additions,
etc. Meanwhile, I was writing other stories. However, I never forgot I still
had a completed story to ‘finish’ in the sense of polishing it up even more
with each submission rejection. I’ve worked long hard on this book and even
when correcting edits, still found it emotionally stimulating. I’m glad I
persevered, and didn’t allow distractions to keep me from my goal.
Excerpt from Stephen's new book - The weather was warm for November and Mom said
they both needed a day of play. After a Happy Meal
at McDonald's, they drove to the park where she
wandered around the new wooden playground. She bounced from
one swing to another, plunged down the slides, ran
through the obstacle course, and teetered back and forth on the
colorful
animals mounted on giant springs. Mom sat on a bench reading a book. Half way up a wall of tires, she realized Mom had disappeared. At first, she didn't notice the big
man. He wore a zippered black jacket, black jeans, and his
arms and legs bulged huge. His mean face was covered with a
lot of
bumps and scars. Before she could scream, the man grabbed her and held a cloth over her mouth. When
she breathed, she smelled something sweet and sickly.
She tried to cough, but instead fell asleep.When she awoke, she found herself in a spacious
room,with bright lights, a camera, a pile of clothing on
a chair, and a box filled with toys and other strange looking
items.
